Chameleon(KO) vs. Magnif(L)

[Chameleon]

6 bar due 24 hour after chek

chek

[Magnif]

Ink the great ....I'm outta place ......face'n an emcee so much bigger//
Yeah right ...your all hype.... I "seal your fate" like a "grave digger"//
Go figure...you knocked me before you battled me..now I'm so close to a win it's tasteable//
I think someone needs to remind "ink" ...he's not "permanant".... but "eraseable"//
You coming up "short" my epic flow "dwarfs" yours..."bail out" ...and just admit it//
like "gm"......I'm to "big to fail"......it's the "clash" of the "titan" and the midget//
I spit in "short burst" your verse is "semi"-good ...mines magnif ...your "automaticaly" merked//
The only way you could ever "come out on top"...is if you post "your verse first"//
Ink does work..like a hoe on the strip..but "he talks so much shit"...I bet his "ass hurts"//
Your fucking horrible at worst.."generic" at best .... your rhymes "worth-less"//
Couldn't be "fly with an s on his chest..this clowns "assed out" like a "hospital gown"...shit here's a stappler//
The only time ink ever got a "peice of ass" ...his thumb went through his last...ply of toilet paper//

[Magnif]

last line was a personal in the chat he was talking about having to shit n being outta tp

[Chameleon]

‘M’ gon choke-on-my-subtle-slews, you hope-for-a-‘W’ but ya ‘characters’ flawed
I’ll clamber-past-Kor to hammer-ya-jaw! Mag aloof? Shiiit, only in a Spanish resort

Like a palpable whore, this femmes-set-to-fold, ‘M’s-getting-old, like Shady on tour
Sadistically more I’ve addled-n-muddled you, so ya Chances-of-‘W’? *See Sadie and Pure*

N I hate to allure, but ‘Ink’s-prone-to-draw’ like silicone-whores to Batchelor digs
Immaculate shit, ‘leave this silly-bitch-departed’, like I pity-gift-imparted a DiCaprio vid

Stand to me kid n i’ll-cut-round-ya-neck, I ‘put-down-tha-vets’ like a stray dogs revenge
Ya-ail-on-this-trend, but gays-gotta-fend, don’t mean a ‘dawgs luck’ is ya tails-on-the-wend

Failure, friend. How-it-look ta bow-to-a-drunk? Cower-you-punk cos I guess you had ya dissident
Ya listenin? I can ‘buck-up-sultry but fuck-tha-multies‘… BBE witness tha 'effortless' bodybag… Magnif I sent

INNIT!

Expo’s

1 - character ‘M’ flawed is ‘W’ (should be pronounced doublyew for the multi)
He’s currently got a battle against Kor as yet unvoted on.
Mag aloof. Magaluf is a Spanish holiday resort - http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Magaluf

2 - palpable means ’flexible / able to fold’
M - Eminem
Chances of ‘W’ (also pronounced doublew for the multi) - double you … sadie was a fictional short-lived double for Purity while she was havin issues (no offence Pure)

3 - Allure means 'to draw' - Ink /draw, self exp
'Departed' is a film with Leonardo DiCaprio

4 - ‘vets’ / veterinarians. The latter ‘put down’ stray dogs
Dogs luck … ummm, complex. Dog / tails. Tails / Luck. (both)/ Wend = Aim or Direction. I’ll give a better expo when I’m sober if required. Possibly.

5 - yh, i'm totally drunk as i wrote this. lol nvm nigga
- dissident (where u think tha word 'diss' comes from?)
sarcasm at me gettin an 'effortless' bag on this nig. didnt even need tha multies
Magnif I sent / Magnificent (yh, its obvious but aint played yet so fuck yoooo!!)

[Magnif]

Still no votes? damn

[BlackDef]

nice battle imma vote soon

[Topp]

flow..ink
personals..ink.
multi...ink.
creativity...ink
my vote...ink
,basic battle no super standout.lpunches from either 1 ink just more polished imo...so..he takes my vote no hate awesome battle

[Korchar]

Mag
Ink the great ....I'm outta place ......face'n an emcee so much bigger//
Yeah right ...your all hype.... I "seal your fate" like a "grave digger"//
-grave diggers don't seal your fate, they seal your grave hole.. fate isn't a synonym for grave hole
-this isn't an insult
-shit's not set up properly because him being all hype (which IS an insult) has nothing to do with you sealing his fate, or atleast not in the way you worded it

Go figure...you knocked me before you battled me..now I'm so close to a win it's tasteable//
I think someone needs to remind "ink" ...he's not "permanant".... but "eraseable"//
+good concept
+this is actually pretty good overall
-except bad rhymes, no setup punch and the setup doesn't really work up the finisher that well

You coming up "short" my epic flow "dwarfs" yours..."bail out" ...and just admit it//
like "gm"......I'm to "big to fail"......it's the "clash" of the "titan" and the midget//
-meh, nothing here.. no wordplay, nameplay, personal etc..
-and the "I" am "quotating" every second "word" really made your flow choppy
-gm/too big to fail << that's a shitty simile
-and if the simile was "bail out like gm" then wtf, why u cutting a simile in half and putting them in 2 diff. lines.. it really reads like you're saying you're too big to fail like GM

I spit in "short burst" your verse is "semi"-good ...mines magnif ...your "automaticaly" merked//
The only way you could ever "come out on top"...is if you post "your verse first"//
-bad delivery, just having related words and quotating them.. u gotta tie ur shit together, "your verse is semi-good so u get automatically merked" that's how easy tieing shit is, and u guys don't do it

Ink does work..like a hoe on the strip..but "he talks so much shit"...I bet his "ass hurts"//
Your fucking horrible at worst.."generic" at best .... your rhymes "worth-less"//
-besides the structure of the sentence, this is horrible

Couldn't be "fly with an s on his chest..this clowns "assed out" like a "hospital gown"...shit here's a stappler//
The only time ink ever got a "peice of ass" ...his thumb went through his last...ply of toilet paper//
-did you just steal a cassidy line?
-, u went yada yada punch yada (last yada was "shit here's a stapler"), punch @ the end son
-repetition of the word ass, uncreative wording
-setup doesn't relate

Overall
I'm not voting on any of your battles until I see no-less than an average of 3 syllable multies. Look at the voting categories; it's punches, personals, wordplay, nameplay, flow, multis << most of which you don't have, haven't seen 1 personal from you.

Ink
‘M’ gon choke-on-my-subtle-slews, you hope-for-a-‘W’ but ya ‘characters’ flawed
I’ll clamber-past-Kor to hammer-ya-jaw! Mag aloof? Shiiit, only in a Spanish resort
-could've been more clear with the M/W nameplay.. like "but ya'd have to flip ya entire character".. "flawed" doesn't really convey the message u want
-oh fuck off with ur obscure spanish references
+dope multies in your in-rhymes
-but characters-flawed, spanish-resort?

Like a palpable whore, this femmes-set-to-fold, ‘M’s-getting-old, like Shady on tour
Sadistically more I’ve addled-n-muddled you, so ya Chances-of-‘W’? *See Sadie and Pure*
+lol @ dissing purity in your raps
-but the chances for a double ew when you see pure is pretty high, so you're saying he has high chances of winning?
-not liking how u didn't switch concepts, bar 1 ur saying he has low chances of winning... bar 2 = same thing :\

N I hate to allure, but ‘Ink’s-prone-to-draw’ like silicone-whores to Batchelor digs
Immaculate shit, ‘leave this silly-bitch-departed’, like I pity-gift-imparted a DiCaprio vid
+liking the complexity in here, where "leave this silly bitch departed" can mean give-this-dude-a-movie and make-him-dissappear simultaneously, u didn't just w/p "departed" you w/p the whole sentence good shit
-kind of meh in every other aspect though besides complexity
-relate your setups more

Stand to me kid n i’ll-cut-round-ya-neck, I ‘put-down-tha-vets’ like a stray dogs revenge
Ya-ail-on-this-trend, but gays-gotta-fend, don’t mean a ‘dawgs luck’ is ya tails-on-the-wend
-vet is kind of played+
+nonetheless I kind of like the spin you put on it
-repeating the word dog, rookie mistake
... I'll give you the benefit of the doubt that dog-tails represent luck

Failure, friend. How-it-look ta bow-to-a-drunk? Cower-you-punk cos I guess you had ya dissident
Ya listenin? I can ‘buck-up-sultry but fuck-tha-multies‘… BBE witness tha 'effortless' bodybag… Magnif I sent
-magnif AYE sent?
-fucking sounds like some lykewise shit
-not tied in exactly like her shit too... ok, think about it this way, if someone said "you're a brittish fag.. cigarrettes" what kinda punchline would that be, tie it in --> "not sure if u smoke, but definately a brittish fag".. much better delivery

Overall
Should always have either a personal or a nameplay, or some really dope wordplay. And relate ya setups better. I do like your transitions (something rarely touched upon here) though, where u keep the old rhymes in the next bar.. helps with flow.

Categories
Punches: Mag, his insults were a bit less generic.. and well, a bit more insulting as well
Nameplay: Ink, just more.. I did really like mags eraseable bar tho
Personals: Ink, only cuz he had some
Flow: Ink, closer multies
Multies: Ink
Wordplay: Mag, close one.. both were pretty packed, m was just more consistant
Enjoyability/originality: both, I really needed this cuz I voted on like 5 wack battles in a row
Vote: Ink, this would've been a lot closer battle if mag had his rhymes closer together and had multies

[bluntwrap420]

Ink the great ....I'm outta place ......face'n an emcee so much bigger//
Yeah right ...your all hype.... I "seal your fate" like a "grave digger"//
-grave diggers don't seal your fate, they seal your grave hole.. fate isn't a synonym for grave hole
-this isn't an insult
-shit's not set up properly because him being all hype (which IS an insult) has nothing to do with you sealing his fate, or atleast not in the way you worded it

Go figure...you knocked me before you battled me..now I'm so close to a win it's tasteable//
I think someone needs to remind "ink" ...he's not "permanant".... but "eraseable"//
+good concept
+this is actually pretty good overall
-except bad rhymes, no setup punch and the setup doesn't really work up the finisher that well

You coming up "short" my epic flow "dwarfs" yours..."bail out" ...and just admit it//
like "gm"......I'm to "big to fail"......it's the "clash" of the "titan" and the midget//
-meh, nothing here.. no wordplay, nameplay, personal etc..
-and the "I" am "quotating" every second "word" really made your flow choppy
-gm/too big to fail << that's a shitty simile
-and if the simile was "bail out like gm" then wtf, why u cutting a simile in half and putting them in 2 diff. lines.. it really reads like you're saying you're too big to fail like GM

I spit in "short burst" your verse is "semi"-good ...mines magnif ...your "automaticaly" merked//
The only way you could ever "come out on top"...is if you post "your verse first"//
-bad delivery, just having related words and quotating them.. u gotta tie ur shit together, "your verse is semi-good so u get automatically merked" that's how easy tieing shit is, and u guys don't do it

Ink does work..like a hoe on the strip..but "he talks so much shit"...I bet his "ass hurts"//
Your fucking horrible at worst.."generic" at best .... your rhymes "worth-less"//
-besides the structure of the sentence, this is horrible

Couldn't be "fly with an s on his chest..this clowns "assed out" like a "hospital gown"...shit here's a stappler//
The only time ink ever got a "peice of ass" ...his thumb went through his last...ply of toilet paper//
-did you just steal a cassidy line?
-, u went yada yada punch yada (last yada was "shit here's a stapler"), punch @ the end son
-repetition of the word ass, uncreative wording
-setup doesn't relate

Overall
I'm not voting on any of your battles until I see no-less than an average of 3 syllable multies. Look at the voting categories; it's punches, personals, wordplay, nameplay, flow, multis << most of which you don't have, haven't seen 1 personal from you.

Ink
‘M’ gon choke-on-my-subtle-slews, you hope-for-a-‘W’ but ya ‘characters’ flawed
I’ll clamber-past-Kor to hammer-ya-jaw! Mag aloof? Shiiit, only in a Spanish resort
-could've been more clear with the M/W nameplay.. like "but ya'd have to flip ya entire character".. "flawed" doesn't really convey the message u want
-oh fuck off with ur obscure spanish references
+dope multies in your in-rhymes
-but characters-flawed, spanish-resort?

Like a palpable whore, this femmes-set-to-fold, ‘M’s-getting-old, like Shady on tour
Sadistically more I’ve addled-n-muddled you, so ya Chances-of-‘W’? *See Sadie and Pure*
+lol @ dissing purity in your raps
-but the chances for a double ew when you see pure is pretty high, so you're saying he has high chances of winning?
-not liking how u didn't switch concepts, bar 1 ur saying he has low chances of winning... bar 2 = same thing :\

N I hate to allure, but ‘Ink’s-prone-to-draw’ like silicone-whores to Batchelor digs
Immaculate shit, ‘leave this silly-bitch-departed’, like I pity-gift-imparted a DiCaprio vid
+liking the complexity in here, where "leave this silly bitch departed" can mean give-this-dude-a-movie and make-him-dissappear simultaneously, u didn't just w/p "departed" you w/p the whole sentence good shit
-kind of meh in every other aspect though besides complexity
-relate your setups more

Stand to me kid n i’ll-cut-round-ya-neck, I ‘put-down-tha-vets’ like a stray dogs revenge
Ya-ail-on-this-trend, but gays-gotta-fend, don’t mean a ‘dawgs luck’ is ya tails-on-the-wend
-vet is kind of played+
+nonetheless I kind of like the spin you put on it
-repeating the word dog, rookie mistake
... I'll give you the benefit of the doubt that dog-tails represent luck

Failure, friend. How-it-look ta bow-to-a-drunk? Cower-you-punk cos I guess you had ya dissident
Ya listenin? I can ‘buck-up-sultry but fuck-tha-multies‘… BBE witness tha 'effortless' bodybag… Magnif I sent
-magnif AYE sent?
-fucking sounds like some lykewise shit
-not tied in exactly like her shit too... ok, think about it this way, if someone said "you're a brittish fag.. cigarrettes" what kinda punchline would that be, tie it in --> "not sure if u smoke, but definately a brittish fag".. much better delivery

Overall
Should always have either a personal or a nameplay, or some really dope wordplay. And relate ya setups better. I do like your transitions (something rarely touched upon here) though, where u keep the old rhymes in the next bar.. helps with flow.

Categories
Punches: Mag, his insults were a bit less generic.. and well, a bit more insulting as well
Nameplay: Ink, just more.. I did really like mags eraseable bar tho
Personals: Ink, only cuz he had some
Flow: Ink, closer multies
Multies: Ink
Wordplay: Mag, close one.. both were pretty packed, m was just more consistant
Enjoyability/originality: both, I really needed this cuz I voted on like 5 wack battles in a row
Vote: Ink, this would've been a lot closer battle if mag had his rhymes closer together and had multies

[Chameleon]

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